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~Trip through Time~

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~Trip through Time~

If I only had the strength,
Would you realize that I'm gone,
If I only had the courage,
To tell you that you're wrong,
If I only had the confidence,
To move on from our past,
Would you love me differently,
If my past reviels myself,

Take my hand, and walk with me,
We'll Take a trip back from destiny,
We'll search the past; for the reasons so,
A never ending path, that I want you to know,
On our journey, from past to past,
Discovering each others lifes,
Would you think of me differently,
If you lived through my life,

Tell me what true love means,
Show me how it really feels,
Introduce me to that feeling,
As it all feels unreal,
Could you handle my past life,
Would you still accept me now,
If everything was a flashback reel,
Would you still feel the same; right now,

Walk through time and the road we're on,
Is this our perfect trip,
Tell me what you're thinking, honey,
Is this what you dreamt,
Take your time, we're in no hurry,
Our destiny is set,
But will you still love me now,
From my past life, present,
and our future self,
Do you want to make this real?


~Rough Draft
~2/23/13
~JaredBrown
~Xaviorzion
It's a rough draft copy, currently still in editing.
Please fill free for your criticism and tell me what you think :]
© 2013 - 2024 Xaviorzion
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CuddleSlut17's avatar
I really like:
"Could you really handle my past life. .. if everything was a flashback reel. I like the flow too. Welcome back Jared. I miss your work. :)