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Friends are friends
they come and go,
true friends stay
to watch the show,

They will be there to the end,
to see your story unfold,
to give you advice,
as you're never alone

True friends are mistaken,
for what they say,
listen to them once,
it might make your day,

Forever in a blue moon,
will you lose a true friend,
until that day comes,
true friends until the end.
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Just something short about friends.
Not really the best format or anything of how to put it.
I hope you like it :)
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:iconlovelesscrosseria:
good, well written and you got some good points
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~Xaviorzion Apr 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you :)
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~xDEVOUTTWI-HARDx Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
I love the rhyming, it's done really well :) And it's a sweet little ditty, this one, I like it :)
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~PaladinEclipse Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone has that one friend that they lost at one point in time. Your writing really speaks to people and I love that about this piece especially. :hug:
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~Xaviorzion Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you for the feedback :)
Indeed, everyone does that one friend that they lose.
Your true friends will be revealed when the time comes.
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~PaladinEclipse Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome! Just glad I could be of help. :)

And I agree. I've gotten a better sense of who my true friends are and everyone should know. :3
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